Is our independence autarky?
And it’s stepping stones muscular
Pen as sword; peace as weapon
Oh! My motherland, prophet with pusher.
Is liberty a privilege?
And a crowning glory to a provoker
Ichor as harmony; sadism as defen
Oh! My kingdom bore peaceful chaos.
Is this democracy an ideal form?
And manifest system’s customer
Fight or obey; imp or zephon
Oh! My federation partly truth with fiction
Dream to fly, added potential
Triumph assured though unrushed.
Thanks to share this poem at the end of the holidays
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No solemos seguir a quién no nos vota.
No nos votas, no te seguimos…
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We do not usually follow who does not vote for us.
You do not vote for us, we do not follow you …
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Feeling of patriotism don’t differ by person from different land. That’s irony though land may differ
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I ❤️ my nation!
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Enjoyed your poem as felt it’s meaning on my own terms…even learned a new word
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I read, an interesting mix of concepts. To me the best lines are “Is this democracy an ideal form?” and “…partly truth with fictions. This last is what we are facing today. Concisely well-written!
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🦋 I love what you have done here. Your poem is vivid and full of meaning.
Thank you for sharing it.
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You raise lots of questions, I am not sure there are any answers.
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Interesting piece.
You raise good points, but do you think they can be answered?
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I don’t think they would be answered by politicians. It’s divine drive for a citizen to be acknowledged about same.
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Such lines👌👌👌
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